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07-16-2010, 09:22 PM
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I kinda like the "loom" lines. Might remember that or a variation thereof for later. The global warming line is funny too.
Upon further review, the "whalers on the moon" scene is probably pretty good as well. Obviously, the "call-in radio show" bit from my scene is optional. And the Apollo stuff could just say "eep!" or something if we want to avoid any chance of it over-emoting.
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