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![]() I'm really not sure how many scenes we need here. Â It's a critical part of the movie, and one of my favourites (Cypher was a backstabbing bastard, but I think there's some merit in his argument about the Matrix). Â I'll let you guys figure out the right length as you go. Â Synopsis is here and here. As for time limits and such, that system so far isn't working, so I'm not going to try anything formal this block. Â However, I've noticed you guys seem to post a lot in the first two days and then drop off. Â Here's my suggestion: after the first two days, if you don't have any more ideas of your own, why not comment on others' scenes or suggest tweaks to them? Â That would keep things active longer, I think.[/color ![]() |
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![]() Tank: You been beemed Cypher: Now im beaming you Tank: GAK! (aside)Ouch! Dozer: GAK! Cypher: Neo is next, so say good bye to him now. Trinity: No, Ill wait for the 3rd movie Cypher: So you are saying some kind of miracle is going to stop me from pulling this plug right now in the 1st movie? Trinity: Yes, and always to make sure you killed the person you were trying to kill. Cypher: Uh oh...GAK! Tank: The fake GAK gets them every time. Neo: Perhaps I should try that sometime.[/color ![]()
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![]() [quote ![]() Neo: Perhaps I should try that sometime.[/quote ![]() And this: [quote ![]() Dozer: GAK! Switch: GAK! Apoc: GAK! Neo: Hm, something's wrong here, but I can't quite put my finger on it.[/quote ![]() It'd be funnier if Tank wasn't first; though I guess we probably don't want to change that. Maybe just switch Tank and Dozer? (GAK, Pseudo-GAK, GAK, GAK)...[/color ![]()
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![]() Cypher: GAK! Tank: Got minutes? Cypher: GAK! Tank: Seems like you are out of minutes. Cypher: Yep GAK! Tank: Pop Quiz. You know what happens to the bad guy after they give long speaches? Cypher: They die? Tank: Correct! Cypher: Yay! GAK! Tank: You missed me. Cypher: But you aren't in the sequels. Tank: You aren't either. Cypher: Oh, you're right. GAK! Tank: Trinity, why am I not in the sequels? Trinity: Ask Morpheus.[/color ![]()
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My 5MV webpages My novel fivers list Yup “There must have been a point in early human history when it was actually advantageous to, when confronted with a difficult task, drop it altogether and go do something more fun, because I do that way too often for it to be anything but instinct.” -- Isto Combs |
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![]() Tank: Can you say it without the gun? Trinity: Tank, are you there? Are you screening your calls? It's Trinity. Cypher: The Operator you are trying to reach has been disconnected. Trinity: Cypher? What are you doing? Cypher: Look, can you honestly say that you're better off with this dead-eyed airhead, saving our crappy real lives, than living with me in fantasyland? Trinity: Compared to you, I'd be better off with a famished cannibal. Tank: Hey, Cypher! Allow me to say--"you're welcome!" Cypher: Lethal irony sucks. GAK![/color ![]()
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