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Well, I threw in my vote for the first one listed because nothing really jumped out at me either. And the first one looks short and snappy and it's silly in a nice where-did-THAT-come-from way.
The second one just doesn't thrill me. It's missing something, possibly. I like the concept behind the third one (but then I was involved in it ). Brown's line could probably be changed and improved.I wrote the fourth one listed, and I still feel the need to change things a bit (see the post where I suggested it for why). Maybe we could make it work by changing Smith's first line to Quote:
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