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ost_uid0="Michiel"][color=#000000 ost_uid0]Alright, I like this combination. I added a joke of my own.[quote ost_uid0]Cypher: Great job pulling me back, Tank. Allow me to say "thank you."Tank: Can you say it without the gun? !GAK Cypher: (over the phone) Trin, -- YANK! (kills Apoc) -- how can you prefer that airhead -- YANK! (kills Switch) -- over a hot backstabbing serial killer like me? Neo: (sigh) I get that one a lot, too. Cypher: (over the phone) Y'see, Neo obviously isn't the One, unless I'm about to be killed by a convenient plot contri- Tank: (over the gun) See, you were looking at my hands, when you should have been looking at my eyes. Cypher: GAK! Tank: Fake GAK. Gets 'em every time. Neo: Maybe I should try that sometime.[/quote ost_uid0]Hm... Now that I think about it. Perhaps the 'looking at my hands' joke would be better for a fight-scene. The above combination also works without it.[/color ost_uid0][/quote ost_uid0][color=#000000 ost_uid0]I would vote for this one, but I wrote half of it...can I give it half a vote? [/color ost_uid0]
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