Sci-fi story help - need a little insight on a story i wrote

[Gatac]

[color=#000000ost_uid0]I'm not too big on "dialogue shorts" (i.e. any short story that primarily centers around two different characters in some sort of philosophical discussion), but other than that, I like it.

To paraphrase the announcer from Propellerheads' "History Repeating" video:

What can I say? It's different.

Gatac[/colorost_uid0]