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ost_uid0]Welcome aboard, G-blatt![quote ost_uid0]Spoon Boy: Use the forks, dummy!!![/quote ost_uid0] I like this one a lot...You have some fun stuff; just one thing to point out. Take a look at other people's posts (and at actual fivers) - the norm here is to break down jokes into very very short blocks, not to combine a whole lot together (jokes are less effective in big lumps). Brevity is the soul of wit, especially when the name of the game starts with "Five Minute." ![]() You'll get the hang of it in no time. Looking at the way the other forumgoers post will help. Always great to have a newcomer - stick around![/color ost_uid0]
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