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Old 11-25-2007, 10:21 PM
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Eh, don't sweat it. If you had fun writing it, that's all that really matters.

If I may critique a little - there's a lot of fat on it as it stands, but it's a good fiver, and suitably trimmed down will make for some great chops, sausages, and bacon. By the by, have I mentioned that we've had a new litter of piglets in the last week?








Mmmm, piglets.
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