Eh, don't sweat it. If you had fun writing it, that's all that really matters.
If I may critique a little - there's a lot of fat on it as it stands, but it's a good fiver, and suitably trimmed down will make for some great chops, sausages, and bacon. By the by, have I mentioned that we've had a new litter of piglets in the last week?
Mmmm, piglets.
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Mason: Luckily we at the Agency use use a high-tech piece of software that will let us spot him instantly via high-res satellite images.
Sergeant: You can? That's amazing!
Mason: Yes. We call it 'Google Earth'.
- Five Minute 24 S1 (it lives, honest!)
"Everybody loves pie!"
- Spongebob Squarepants
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