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Old 03-20-2004, 05:46 AM
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[color=#000000ost_uid0][quoteost_uid0="Pteryx"]Scooter's got another good idea here, though his second block could stand to be shortened:[/quoteost_uid0]
Well, Pteryx has a point, my original submission could be tightened. Redux:

[bost_uid0]Cypher[/bost_uid0]: Great job pulling me back, Tank. Allow me to say "thank you."
[bost_uid0]Tank[/bost_uid0]: Can you say it without the gun?

[bost_uid0]Cypher[/bost_uid0]: Hey Trinity, are you really better off with this airhead, saving our crappy real lives, than living with me in fantasyland?
[bost_uid0]Trinity[/bost_uid0]: Compared to you, I'd be better off with a famished cannibal.
[bost_uid0]Tank[/bost_uid0]: Hey, Cypher! Allow me to say--"you're welcome!"
[bost_uid0]Cypher[/bost_uid0]: Lethal irony sucks. GAK!


Though I did like the "disconnected" line. [/colorost_uid0]
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