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Old 05-15-2003, 11:50 AM
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[color=#000000ost_uid0][quoteost_uid0]As to combining scenes - they work if you can make the seen work, I think putting it together with the "hear to shoot people" bit makes it too clumsy and it distracts from the heart of the joke.[/quoteost_uid0]

Hmm. You're right. I really need to get used to this format...

Are we sticking to one paragraph for this block?

[quoteost_uid0]Morpheus: The Matrix is control, Neo. A computer-generated dreamworld, designed to turn a human being... into this.
Neo: A red M&M?
Morpheus: Damn! Wrong pocket!
Neo: Can I have it?
Morpheus: No, I told you the red ones are my favourite. [/quoteost_uid0]

I don't like this variation too much... The emphasis here really needs to be on the "wrong pocket," not on the running gag(?).[/colorost_uid0]
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